NAME : NIKEN WARDIANI SUWANDI
NIM : A320090155
There are grandfather and grandson that sit in front of their home. There is mango tree in front of yard. They chats there. When the wind go away. Then grandfather said “ Where we live is our beautiful paradise. Where we see are freedom. There are free from election, free to talk, etc” . His grandson asked ” I don’t know what you means,grandpa. Why do like that, grandpa?”. Then grandfather tells his grandson about the story in the past. Grandfather starts the story. It happened when our country was colonized by Dutch. When your grandfather became fighter. Sadness was only there. What we need is gun. What we need is motivation to fight the colonizer. Dutch made our country became dark. I lost my friend in the battlefield. Where they sleep forever there. But we get happiness now. It was reward from the fighter in the past. Where we live now is our home sweet home. You are as young generation have to keep it. His grandson with enthusiastic said” I will do it, grandpa. Be good young generation”. Grandfather smiled. It sign that he proud to his grandson
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Dear Niken,
The content of your composition is inspiring enough. Unfortunately you still make some mistakes in your sentence structures, such as They chats there.should be They chat there. When the wind go away.should be When the wind goes away. Why do like that, grandpa?”.should be Why does it look like that, grandpa?”. and many others. Please be careful with your grammar.
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